Monday, February 14, 2011

THE POOL PLAYERS. SEVEN AT THE GOLDEN SHOVEL.



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Real cool, left school.

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we
Lurk late,
strike straight.

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Sing sin, thin gin.
Jazz June, die soon.
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  1. JessFebruary 17, 2011 at 5:28 AM

    Hi Gabriel,

    I like the condensed form here--how does that change the poem's impact for you? Also, what is the idea behind separating all the action from the agents?

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